I love it ... It's cool and a good idea. I can't wait till chapter two!!!!!!! I think it's cool how you develops each caracter into the.story and let everyone see them by looking at the drawing you drew,( which are all great) .i personally like to be able to see how the author saw the fur because everyone has a different idea on what certiant ones look like.
This is just to fill in the rest of the space. ( I'm watching deathnote again cuz I'm bored and would like you to tell me a few good anime to watch I've run dry in my anime shows)
Keep up the good work in the year ahead !!!